I don't know how to begin....need better animation...less language and more professinalism to be considered real animation let alone anime. the voice overs where to loud and obnoxious. you are emulating the same behaviors that you are putting down in your animation. Bad animation about questionable animation does not equal great animation.
Technically sound, I would make the body sway and move with the strides of it legs. Also the head should move as well unless he is in hunting mode where they stiffen their neck. Other than that I think it was an impressive exercise and shows promise for your skills.
I must've stared at dogs walking and references for like 6 hours total during this. And between learned flash for the first time and how a dog walks, i was like holy fuck its complicated. but i think by the last quarted of my work it became much more understandable and natural. when i was too far into it and already finished so many parts i started to see the head problem and other small things. the body swaying is a very good idea, thank you for that and im definitely going to consider that factor in my future endeavors! :D
I wish there was a way to give you more than 5 stars. More entertaining then stick fights. Something to aspire to. Double star day for you!!!
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